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Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 41 Karma: -69

"Heads down!" yelled Doc shouting orders at TTM. "Sir we lost contact with Max B., Knux and ZZ!" yelled weird max. "Are you sure?" questioned Doc. "Yes sir last time we had contact was behind cog lines."Max said. "Well we better get over there A.S.A.P.!" Doc said.....

"Is...Is..everyone alright?" asked ZZ to the others that were in the plane crash. "Max B. and I are fine sir I don't know about the others." said Knux in a slow voice. "Well men shake it off!" yelled ZZ. We got to our feet. "Sir?" I asked. "yes Sgt. Max?" "Well sir where are we?" I asked. ZZ pondered. "Well Max looking at the detail of the gray a plane crashed and cogs parts everywhere I think were behind enemy lines." ZZ said. Knux and I went silent. We looked for shelter we couldn't find any so we had to make some. "Sir look cogs!" I said in a voice so the cogs won't hear us. We hid behind debris, Knux stuck his head out. "So when will the bombs in Toontown go off sir?" asked a cog to a hudge cog. When we tried to look who it was we couldn't see its head was up to the clouds! "Soon my dear cog..Soon BWAHAHAHAHHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"....

"Sir we got though the marine cogs!" Max W. said to Doc. "Good but we still haven't found Max, Knux and ZZ are!" Doc said. Doc called in a search party. About 7 hours after the search they found an entrance behind Goofy Speedway. "Well private Zeake go check it out." said Doc (if your name is Zeake i'm sorry) "Sir yes sir!" said the Pvt. he went in looked and looked around. "Sir its ok theres no mine--" BOOOOOM! BAM CRASH! "I knew it...Mines!" Doc said. "Max W.!" said Doc. "Yes sir?" asked Max W. "Go get the mine sweepers." Doc said....

2000 hours (10:00 pm)

"Sir there planning an attack on toontown!" I yelled. "Calm down Max, don't worry we'll stop them at any costs." said ZZ. I looked around, up down left to right then I spotted somthing! "Sir look a radio! we can call Doc to tell him where we are!" I shouted jumping up and down. ZZ ran over to it trying to contact Doc.

"SIR! Its ZZ hes on the radio!" Max W. said running with the radio to Doc. "COME IN I REPEAT COME IN!" the radio shouted. "ZZ? is that you?" asked Doc. "OF COURSE BUT I know what the cogs are doing there gunna blow up--" the radio went blank.......

"Aghhh! let go of me you stupid cog!" yelled ZZ. The cog laughed. then ZZ got his F2000 out of his back pocket, Gun fires were heard. "WOW look at ZZ take on that cog!" Knux said. I nodded. "Knux we better go try to get out of here!" I said. we both nodded. ZZ killed the cog and we started to run the BAM! I WAS HIT BY A SNIPER! "MAX!! NOOOOOOOO!" ZZ and Knux shouted. I layed on the ground.... they ran and picked me up then they started to run twardes a blown up helicopter. "Max hang in there bud please we need you to stay with us!" shouted Knux while tears ran down his cheeks. "Its....Its...o..k really...Just..Jus.. tell..my..wife I...love her.." I coughed. "We lost him..."ZZ said. Knux was full of rage.. "I"M GUNNA GET YOU!" He ran twards the sniper. Knux pulled out his f2000...BAM BOOM SLASH CRASH...AHHHHHHH!...The sniper was dead. "I'm fine lets just get out of here ZZ!" yelled Knux. They started to run...

3 WEEKS LATER AT 1400 (4:00)

"Doc I see ZZ and Knux!!!" yelled weird Max. "Good there alright!" Doc said in a low voice. ZZ and Knux ran twards the team. "You guys are alright! and also ZZ what were you saying on the radio?" Asked Werid Max. "Oh the cogs were trying to blow up toontown but we stopped them alright!" ZZ said happily. "Wheres Max B I wanted to talk to him." Doc said. Knux and ZZ lowerd there heads. "He..He didn't make it sir," said ZZ with his eyes full of water. "I'm sorry" Doc nodded.

1 DAY LATER 1100 (1:00)
AT THE GRAVE YARD..
"We are gathered hear today to witness a berial of one of TTm's greatest, Max B. He was a proud soldier of TTM and we shall all remember him a rough and tough soldier. He is looking down at us from a better place." Doc said to TTM.
They placed me in my coffin closed it and put me in the ground..

The tombstone read:Here lies Max Bagelnerd a soldier that will be remebered for many years to come

THE END

Joined: 27 Feb 2006 Posts: 29 Karma: +2

Max very nice!!!

Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Posts: 41 Karma: -69

Thank you i'm going to make a new story its gunna be called: Brotherhoods of Soldiers

Site Admin Joined: 11 Feb 2006 Posts: 69 Karma: +165

So your not going to finish this one.

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it is finished,there out from behind enemy lines.