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AT A TOONTOWN MILITARY CAMP
"Hey guys" Doc said Happily coming out of his tent. "Hello sir!" I said with exitment. ZZ and Flip laughed at me. I started to laugh too. "Ok guys settle down now were planning an attack on the Evil Clans." Doc said in a secretive voice. "Hey Max?" said Doc. "Yes sir?" i said "When are you ever gunna spend time with your wife!" Doc asked. "Well I nwas going to but-" I was cut off. The whole Campsite went quit...."INCOMING! GET DOWN!" yelled a soldier and a bomb hit the Camp....Several men were killed. "Is every one ok?! I asked. Doc was hurt! I rushed up to pick him blown up..BOOOOOOM several bombs went everywhere! I had Shell shock everything was so blurry ZZ's voice was in Slow motion.. 'Hey MAX is Doc ok?' he asked in his slow motion voice (I was still in Shell SHock and blurry) "Ithink so" I said.Everything went back to normal....Gun shots grenades etc. I still had Doc on my back he was still breathing that was good but alot of blood was on him. I rushed up Hill98 (Hill 98 is made up i just thought of it.) Doc please don't die on me! i thought. BAM a grenade went right past us! I got shell shock again and slo mo I ran up to a medic "Hes not good heal him i'll cut off the enemy!" I said i took out my sniper and crouched behind a blown up jeep. Flip slid behind the jeep with me. "Nice time to show up eh Flip." I said "Oh shut up and tell me what you see Capitan." He said after hitting my head. "Ok i got a tank over by the east a sniper on that building and a missle launcher guy to the left of us." I said. "Sir!" the medic rushed up to us "Docs ok he'll need to recouperate." he said then he ran back to his bunker. "Hey Flip," i said "Ya?" he asked. "good luck out there...I don't wanna loose you. Your like a brother to m-" I was cutt off my radio was calling for me it was ZZ. "Max theres a turret in the south get him!" "roger that" i said. I looked in the scope looked south I saw him...WOOSH! "That was easy." i said then i blowed the top of the sniper. Flip ran out to a destroyed wall. "Flip," i said on the radio. "look out a gunners coming up to the wall." A bullet went right past me. I switched the radio to 'ALL MEMBERS'. "Maydey Maydey they found out i'm here requesting back up!" i shouted. ZZ slided on the tank took out his f2000 and BAM WOOSH CRASH SWOOSH! he killed about 30 people! I told him nice job. I shot someone else in the head. I told ZZ to cover me and I switched my Sniper with my pistol and ran twards a tank. I opend the hatch boom bam killed the men who were in it. "Hey ZZ look out!" ZZ looked behind him..BAM! ZZ was shot! I was full of rage my bones shaked my eyes full of tears. "RRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!" I YELLED running up Hill 98 shooting I shot the man who shot ZZ I ran twards ZZ. "Please ZZ hang in there...MEDIC!MEDIC COME ON WHERES THE MEDIC!!!!" I said with my screeching voice because of the tears in my eyes and I felt a lump in my throat. "Hang in there ZZ please. A medic appeared.BAM! the medic was shot. I hezitated. I looked at ZZ his eyes full of tears and patted me on the back then his hand dropped. I was hystericly crying. I WAS FULL OF RAGE NOW I RAN INTO THE OPEN AND STARTED FIRING....BAM BOOM WHOOSH SMASH CRASH! Flip came and joined me...

5 hours later...

"Good job Max." he said. I didn't respond, He knew that ZZ died. "Look Max i know you liked ZZ he was like your brother but you got me and Doc come on its ok." he said trying to cheer me up. "NO nothings the same without ZZ nothing!" I said then i cooled down... "I just...I just..He was like a broth-" Doc interruped "Max its ok well bury him you can say what you wanna say everythings gunna be ok." Doc said limping twards us. "I know I know I will remember this war...Hill 98...........

THE END
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